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Flushing It Out of Vegas - In Search of the Elusive Royal-Day5

Wow, thanks for the feedback Mark. You are too kind. Glad you are
enjoying my writing.

Hey RF-er:
As a veteran trip reporter (on vpFree_Reno), I wish to single out this
paragraph as my personal favorite from your very special, very
engrossing daily trip reports, so full of beautiful prose which at
times mimics the crude surroundings. To appeal to the readers
olfactory sense so succinctly proves your brilliance.

Even tho' I thrive on positive feedback for my reports, I want to
improve them by peppering my reports with more artful snippets like this:

->--"Royal Flusher" wrote:

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I had a quick breakfast of second hand smoke, eggs, hash browns,
toast, and hot brown stuff at the counter in Careful Kittys, paying
with points. I loved every clogged alveolar minute of it.

Keep on the hunt and keep the reports coming. Who needs YouTube when
words can tell the story. Your audience appreciates it.

~Mark 'my words'

Hi RF,

I couldn't agree with Mark more. I have also posted many TRs over
the last few years, and know how much of your personal feelings and
thoughts go into the effort. I too believe that, along with Mark's
excellent writing skills, your TR is among the best I've read in a
long time.

I hope that you make many more exciting forays to Nevada, and detail
and post each one in the same very clever and readable fashion as the
last five-parter!

Congrats on finally snagging that elusive royal! Believe me, we were
pulling for you. I even called my old gal pal, the Royal Flush
Goddess, and asked her to shake her tailfeathers over your machine.
I'm glad that she cooperated!

Regards,
~Babe~

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--- In vpFREE@yahoogroups.com, "Royal Flusher" <royalflusher@...>wrote:

Wow, thanks for the feedback Mark. You are too kind. Glad you are
enjoying my writing.

Mark wrote: Hey RF-er:
As a veteran trip reporter (on vpFree_Reno), I wish to single out this
paragraph as my personal favorite from your very special, very
engrossing daily trip reports, so full of beautiful prose which at
times mimics the crude surroundings. To appeal to the readers
olfactory sense so succinctly proves your brilliance..............